Chapter 1 - Page 1

29th Apr 2015, 11:00 AM in Crash Landing
Chapter 1 - Page 1
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TheMightyBox 29th Apr 2015, 11:00 AM edit delete
TheMightyBox
It's a bit of a slow start, but I promise as soon as we get this ball rolling things'll pick up.

And I am starting this comic with a shoutout to good ol' Cap, but I am aiming to cut out any direct references. Nothing against them, but in the genre of superhero comics directly inspired from superhero comics, I think they're just a bit overdone.

And I would also prefer to never need to draw perfect stars and concentric circles ever again.
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DryKirby64 29th Apr 2015, 11:40 AM edit delete reply
DryKirby64
When you're a Kirby fan-artist you get sick of drawing perfect stars very quickly.

Anyway, you seem to be on a black-and-white trend recently, what with the comic your avatar came from and now this. I guess it's an easy way to show that it's a vision or a flashback. (I've always liked messing with the interface better.)

But I digress, great work. Can't wait to see where this goes. I think maybe I'd change the font? Serif isn't really good for comic fonts other than for individual "I"s. It doesn't really matter either way though.
TheMightyBox 29th Apr 2015, 11:54 AM edit delete reply
TheMightyBox
Actually, I had decided that the comic would be in black and white a long, long time ago. Mainly because it just makes things easier.
It's the Mokepon route, color for covers, b&w for the actual pages.
DryKirby64 29th Apr 2015, 12:07 PM edit delete reply
DryKirby64
Oh, I see. My mistake.
Lenrap 29th Apr 2015, 4:31 PM edit delete reply
While it is just the first page, it looks really promising.
GigaNerd17 29th Apr 2015, 10:26 PM edit delete reply
GigaNerd17
Oh man, circles and stars are the worst! XD

Very happy with the narrative so far. I get a good sense of the protagonist's personality from just one page.

What's on her shirt?
TheMightyBox 29th Apr 2015, 10:31 PM edit delete reply
TheMightyBox
You got me admitting my references just after saying I'd try and cut down on them >.>

It's a cartoon pig, but it's based on the shirt design that her namesake wears in Resonance of Fate.
DiZ Boshi 3rd May 2015, 11:09 AM edit delete reply
You think I wouldn't recognize Capitain America? Try me!! I'm above avarege on comic stuff, specially on Marvel. I really like Marvel comics, me being fan of Spider Man and practically all the avengers.

Anyway, as everyone says, this looks promising. Keep the pages coming!!
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