Chapter 1 - Page 3

13th May 2015, 11:00 AM in Crash Landing
Chapter 1 - Page 3
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TheMightyBox 13th May 2015, 11:00 AM edit delete
TheMightyBox
You can't call me out on being cliched if I call myself out first. It's the rules.
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Lenrap 14th May 2015, 5:51 PM edit delete reply
This plot is getting me interested...I wonder how this will lead into the title image...
DiZ Boshi 19th May 2015, 8:10 AM edit delete reply
Come on Mighty!! Don't be afraid of the cliches!! Embrace them!! Love them!! Be one!! (ok, to much, lol).

Anyway, the plot is getting deeper and more interesting, which is how things should be to bring attention. No fun if one starts showing the full fireworks. This story is flowing amazingly, and you should keep at it. Good job!!
TheMightyBox 19th May 2015, 9:36 PM edit delete reply
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I'm glad you guys are enjoying it.

I'm just kinda afraid that the exposition-y setup is a bit of a slog, a necessary slog mind you, but a slog, and given that I only update once a week it might not keep people interested when all the promised superheroics are just hanging on the edge of tomorrow.
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