Chapter 1 - Page 4

20th May 2015, 11:00 AM in Crash Landing
Chapter 1 - Page 4
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TheMightyBox 20th May 2015, 11:00 AM edit delete
TheMightyBox
Not too entirely proud of the art of this one, but there isn't that much of it anyways, so it's cool.

Fun fact, I considered for a while having her wear her hair in a braid instead of a ponytail, so that's where that little design comes from.
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GigaNerd17 20th May 2015, 12:01 PM edit delete reply
GigaNerd17
I somehow missed last week's update. Sorry! >_<;

I wouldn't worry about the exposition. It usually slogs when they try to make the protagonist "relatable" by having him talk to their best friend of the other sex for several pages. What you're doing here is letting us really get to know this person and her thought processes, not forcing us to stomach half an issue of baseless friendship/sexual tension masquerading as an introduction. I sincerely hope you don't let up on the down-to-earth writing after Martius goes super.
Guybrush20X6 20th May 2015, 6:54 PM edit delete reply
Guybrush20X6
I think last week you set the comis's release time wrong so it did who up on the new releases. Happen on Level 30 more than once (stupid DST).

And don't worry about it being a bit slow. Chrono Trigger took three separate time travel incidents for the plot to get going.
TheMightyBox 20th May 2015, 7:13 PM edit delete reply
TheMightyBox
The fact that it seems to operate in a separate time zone kept throwing me off, but I think I've got it down now.
CidYoshi 22nd May 2015, 10:26 AM edit delete reply
CidYoshi
Alright, new real nick, new post.

Indeed, sometimes the working people, specially the ones that are working to help out others are heroes by their own means. I know... many on the public services are corrupt, but I'm talking of the honest ones. To those, I sallute you.

About the comic flow... I guess is better to sometimes go slow then rushing the plot and leaving loopholes. Besides, the characterization so far is good. Yeah, too slow is not good either, but I feel is more manegable.

Keep it up!! I might as well subscribe to this comic too :3
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